"Vivoli"

signage | glass and paint | Florence

I like this playful, fat script. It's for a gelateria in Florence. I have a couple issues with the type however, it's not very smooth - look at the first i, I'm not sure why there's that dip indent in the bottom right side of the stroke. Then where the V and O connect, the top of the stroke kind of cuts into the V and I think it would be better if it was smoother. There's something strange going on over the top of the O as well, not sure why that's so inflated. Overall I love the idea of the fun, retro, fat script for a gelateria.