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signage | metal | Pisa
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I like the body text but I think the p and the z of Spiza in the title are too open. Also I think the connecters of the letters are too extended, the beginning tail of d of d'Oro is too far out and the connecting stroke of the O is also too far out there. It's not connecting to anything so I don't see why it should be so far out there.
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